We presented our pitch to the class and each group was given a feedback sheet to fill out based on what they see and get from our pitch. These sheets contained feedback of both positives and negatives but also things we could consider and improve on.
In conclusion to looking at all the sheets and hearing what they had to say in the discussion, most think that we have a good detailed backstory for our band which is of course a positive and also our ideas of style and how we want the band to come ascross is all clear. However there are negatives and things we can work on which is mainly the whole video idea and what we exactly want in our video. Our ides are to broad and we need to start being specific. Maybey also rethinking about our location idea as the London locations we had originaly thought of were prehaps to typical and cheesy and not really representational of our band.
After listening and reading all the feedback given we have taken it on board and agreed with many of the points therefore we are now thinking of a more realistic approach to our music video. We have discussed ideas and will shortly be changing our pitch to accommodate the new ideas we have discussed.
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